One hot day Bobby the brown giraffe was at the beach. Bobby thought it was super hot, he went to get some ice-cream from across the road. Bobby got scared when he was waiting for the green man when a car flew right passed him “WOAH” said Bobby. Bobby crossed the road and entered teddy’s ice-cream “hello” said Jimmy the owner of the shop “What would you like” said Jimmy “A greasy salt ice-cream please” said Bobby “Coming right up” said Jimmy and gave Bobby the ice-cream. Bobby walked outside to eat his ice-cream but it already melted. THE END
Hey Max,
I really enjoyed your story,
My favourite Ice-creams are definitely greasy salt ice cream (definitely)…
I wonder was the giraffe just dreaming?
From Naglis
Mrs Boyce’s Class
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Hi Max I really liked your story because it was a bit strange. I feel really sad for the Giraffe. The driver should be careful. Please coment on our stories at https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net Kacper Mrs boyces 5th class
Hi Max,
I like the way the Giraffe is going to get some ice – cream because it’s so hot,
All his hard work to get an ice – cream and then it melts.
By For Now Danny Mrs Boyce’s Class.
HI Max
I would sad that if I waited that long to get an ice cream and then it melted
also why is bobby a ,brown giraffe, I would sure want to see one of those
Kanturk Co.Cork
Mrs boyce’s class