Loopy Love – By Frances

His hair was yellow and shiny, sometimes it even looked like the glimmering sun. He left me feeling dizzy and hopeless… Butterflies would rise to my stomach every time I thought of him. Some days I would find myself thinking, ”He’s too thin,” or  ”His legs are to tiny.” But really that was just a distraction from thoughts like, ”I love you,” flooding through my head.

Sadly his decision was clear, for I was a simple golden retriever and he was an all mighty labrador. There would be no place for me in his life. That was until now…

11 thoughts on “Loopy Love – By Frances”

  1. Thank you all so much for all the support!!!!!
    Your all so kind and I couldn’t wish for better classmates/friends! <3333
    😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀

  4. I loved this story and really want to now more about what will happen so good grace p

  5. AAAWWWW!!!
    That was really nice and sweet I loved the cliffhanger at the end. Its making me really want to read more about the story!!!
    Everyone’s is really nice too!
    -Ishitha:)

  6. AAAWWWW!!!
    That was really nice and sweet I loved the cliffhanger at the end. Its making me really want to read more about the story!!!
    Everyone’s is really nice too.
    -Ishitha:)

  7. Great work!
    Your so talented!
    You must be so proud…. <3333
    Love all of it!
    Hope u win whatever their is to win!
    You should be an author….. ???? 😀

  8. I loved how this was like a dog love story.
    I also loved the title and adjectives.
    Maybe make it a happy endding next time.
    Great job.

  9. WOW! Great story! It was descriptive and very well written. i would have never thought of the idea myself. i also loved the cliffhanger at the end. it made me want to know more! Well done!!! from grace d

  10. I thought it was very good and I liked that it was from the dog’s perspective. It was very descriptive too.
    Well done! From Ellie

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