His hair was yellow and shiny, sometimes it even looked like the glimmering sun. He left me feeling dizzy and hopeless… Butterflies would rise to my stomach every time I thought of him. Some days I would find myself thinking, ”He’s too thin,” or ”His legs are to tiny.” But really that was just a distraction from thoughts like, ”I love you,” flooding through my head.
Sadly his decision was clear, for I was a simple golden retriever and he was an all mighty labrador. There would be no place for me in his life. That was until now…
Thank you all so much for all the support!!!!!
Your all so kind and I couldn’t wish for better classmates/friends! <3333
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Hi Frances, I really like your story. I thought it was really funny. I also wrote a story using the five words, but I didn’t do one about a crush. The one thing you forgot to do was bold the five word prompt , but other than that you did a great job.
Happy writing from Kayla in Illinois
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it was amazing!!!!There were no floes, the story was so grabbing O.W. O-O
I loved this story and really want to now more about what will happen so good grace p
AAAWWWW!!!
That was really nice and sweet I loved the cliffhanger at the end. Its making me really want to read more about the story!!!
Everyone’s is really nice too!
-Ishitha:)
AAAWWWW!!!
That was really nice and sweet I loved the cliffhanger at the end. Its making me really want to read more about the story!!!
Everyone’s is really nice too.
-Ishitha:)
Great work!
Your so talented!
You must be so proud…. <3333
Love all of it!
Hope u win whatever their is to win!
You should be an author….. ???? 😀
I loved how this was like a dog love story.
I also loved the title and adjectives.
Maybe make it a happy endding next time.
Great job.
WOW! Great story! It was descriptive and very well written. i would have never thought of the idea myself. i also loved the cliffhanger at the end. it made me want to know more! Well done!!! from grace d
I thought it was very good and I liked that it was from the dog’s perspective. It was very descriptive too.
Well done! From Ellie
Thanks Ellie!
-Frances