My new owner!! By Karen

Hello! My name is Molly and I’m a cute puppy! I lived in a huge house with my very kind owner and my loving mother. I always got enough food to eat and a comfy bed to sleep on but yesterday my owner disappeared and my mother ran away and I was left alone in the house . Soon I was brought to a new home¬† and that’s how I ended up here! My new owner is a mean and selfish person and I don’t like her. Yesterday my food bowl was empty. I was surprised ! How could she be so mean?¬†

 

2 thoughts on “My new owner!! By Karen”

  1. Karen,
    Well done on your 100WC, when I think back to your writing at the beginning of 5th class you have really made good progress. Your writing is making much more sense and you are starting to develop a style, a voice, in your writing. Well done you!!

    Keep up the great work,

    Ciara

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