The Graveyard by Luca

We were trapped. It would not be long until the man found us. We frantically tried to think of a plan for when we saw him emerge from the misty fog. It would not have been long until he found our hiding spot behind the gravestone. It was then Luke screamed, alerting the man to our hiding spot. We started running as fast as we could but he grabbed Luke before he could run. Me and Ruby could only watch as the man menacingly raised his knife towards Luke’s chest. It was then his scream echoed into the night.

One thought on “The Graveyard by Luca”

  1. Hello Luca,

    Your impressive story, a nightmare situation, caught my interest from its beginning. Trapped in a graveyard with a misty fog hiding the approaching man, an attempted escape where Luke was captured and the sound of a scream echoing in the night as Luke met his fate could be the beginning of a true horror story. Well done.

    One small suggestion… remember to use all prompt words in your story.

    With your skill as a writer, I hope you can continue entering the 100WC. Creative ideas and your ability with words should be shared with others.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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