The invisible church By Karen

My parents and I went  to  Northern Ireland for our  holiday. It was a  long drive until we reached our hotel in Belfast. When I jumped out of the car I found a  church standing in the distance. I asked my parents if we could visit but they said they couldn’t see it even though  it was right in front of them! So we all went back to the hotel to have a nap but I couldn’t sleep. I scrambled out of bed and ran for the church the next moment, I was inside. I looked around, the place was absolutely humongous!!!

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  1. Hi Karen,
    Well done on your 100WC. I liked the idea behind your prompt. Next time, try to build more tension around the prompt, this can be very exciting for the reader!
    Keep up the great work,
    Ciara

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