The Unusual Box… by Lucy C

“Wow!” I said. “What a great deal!” I had seen a mystery box full of goodies that was on sale! Sweets, chocolate and more! “Here is the money,” I said, but when I opened the box, it was empty! What a surprise! I ran back to the shop and asked for my money back. “Have a look at this,” I said. “It’s empty!” Then, the shopkeeper opened the box, and it was full to the brim! I decided that I was wrong, so I went home. When I opened the box again, it was still empty! What is happening today!

3 thoughts on “The Unusual Box… by Lucy C”

  1. Hi Lucy
    This reminded me a little of traditional tales such as the magic porridge pot where the box appears empty then overflowing with little explanation. Super use of the prompt this week and an enjoyable story to read.
    Miss T Team 100wc

  2. Lucy- very well done on an excellent 100WC. I love the way you have used the prompt and I am mystified by the idea of a magic box although how annoying for it to be empty when you have spent money on it!
    Keep up the excellent work Lucy,


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